Not bad, not bad.
Well, although I can't say the idea is origional, nor the jokes, I can say that their was some time and effort put into this. My only major problem is that you didn't cut off the jokes quick enough, or lingered too long on one scene, as though leading one to believe there would be more...but alas, there wasn't.
Its not bad, I kind of like it, but it definately could use a better script.
Shows some potential
I'd have to say, I was somewhat surprised. It was expecting something entirely different, which is both a good and bad thing. The graphics could definately have been better, but, I'm not to concerned about that myself. Perhaps programing the candy bar to randomly appear on screen could have made it harder, I don't know, I have no experience with game designe, so...yeah.
Anyway, keep it up, you'll get it someday, you just don't have it now.
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